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Sunday, July 24, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - Princess Slave

Six Sentence Sunday
Princess Slave

“You want me to touch you, but you can’t admit it.” His thick voice tickled her ears. The smug smile on his face turned her stomach because he was right.

“You are wrong,” she whispered hoarsely.

“So you can admit you want my hands on your body.”

“Stop this.”



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24 comments:

Ray Sostre said...

Pretty Good. I'm waiting for more

Graylin Fox said...

I love play like that. Wonderful snippet.

Jean said...

STeamy, sexy exchange. Looks like he's got her right where he wants her. Yummy. Great six!

Vivien Jackson said...

Very old-school, with the heroine resisting temptation. Makes the eventual surrender all the sweeter. :)

Jayel Kaye said...

slap him already!

Debra Moore said...

"You want me to touch you." Hello! Great line!

Sara York said...

Thanks everyone. And yes, she does want him.

Sarah Grimm said...

Great snippet! I love it!

Sherry Gloag said...

great building of anticipation, of course she wants him! Great six.

Alix said...

Steamy six, and it read with a really nice flow. Thank you.

Bree said...

Ah. He's a clever one, isn't he? lol! Sexy six!

Cara Bristol said...

Methinks he thinks she doth protest too much. Nice six.

Sam Crescent said...

Wonderful six

Lex Valentine said...

Oooh. Arrogant Alpha!

wearegoingonawitchhunt said...

He's a cheeky one! Loved it :)

Carrie Ann Ryan said...

I wonder what is going to happen next! Great Six!

Zee Monodee said...

Oooh, this is so intense! Well done!

Lindsay said...

Love the dialogue. Teasing

Sara York said...

He is a very Alpha guy and he does take charge so well.

Liz said...

awesome! thanks for sharing
Liz

Sandy Nachlinger said...

I love the juxtaposition of "he was right" and her reply, "You are wrong." Good writing.

Melynda Price said...

I love the dialogue. Great verbal foreplay :)

Rawiya said...

I like that alot. great job

Lucy Felthouse said...

Very steamy - well done! :)