Nick shook off his fear and walked out of his office and straight into another person. He screamed and flailed his arms. The rapid beat of his heart echoed in his ears.
"Oh God, I didn't mean to run into you." The man stepped back, his hands grasping Nick's upper arms.
For a moment Nick fought the stranger's grip.
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11 comments:
Creepy and intriguing. Who is this mysterious stranger?
Hooks me. Want to know what happens next.
I want to read
A great Six.
Thanks everyone.
Hmmm...I wonder what happens next, intriguing six!
Heck, that was some reaction to just bumping into someone. Wonder what spooked him in the first place. Great snippet!
Great hook! Raises lots of questions for me.
Intriguing snippet xx
Wow, what caused such a huge overreaction?!
Ahh, you'll have to read to find out what spooked him.
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