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Sunday, July 10, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - Surprise Sleepover


Nick shook off his fear and walked out of his office and straight into another person. He screamed and flailed his arms. The rapid beat of his heart echoed in his ears.

"Oh God, I didn't mean to run into you." The man stepped back, his hands grasping Nick's upper arms.

For a moment Nick fought the stranger's grip.


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11 comments:

Lisa Fox said...

Creepy and intriguing. Who is this mysterious stranger?

Cara Bristol said...

Hooks me. Want to know what happens next.

Cynthia Garcia said...

I want to read

Sam Crescent said...

A great Six.

Sara York said...

Thanks everyone.

Nichelle Gregory said...

Hmmm...I wonder what happens next, intriguing six!

gayleramage said...

Heck, that was some reaction to just bumping into someone. Wonder what spooked him in the first place. Great snippet!

Bree said...

Great hook! Raises lots of questions for me.

JoAnne Kenrick said...

Intriguing snippet xx

Pippa Jay said...

Wow, what caused such a huge overreaction?!

Sara York said...

Ahh, you'll have to read to find out what spooked him.