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Sunday, September 11, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - Princess Slave


Will Princess Ava survive?

Dark, lifeless eyes stared up at Ava, condemning her to a fate worse than death. The twenty thousand Zebuluns in the stands surrounding her fell silent. Ava looked at the woman lying dead at her feet. The knife still protruded garishly from her side. Blood still flowed from the wound.
A week of eating drugged food, what little they had allowed her, and drinking tainted water left her weak, but the fight for her life had cleared some of the fog that puzzled her brain. Horror washed over her. She’d just killed another being.

3 comments:

Lisa Worrall said...

OMG- extremely tense six, honey !

An Open Book said...

WOW- what suspense and you can feel her fear
Dawne P

Muffy Wilson said...

I really could feel the suspence building. I loved it and want more:) xo