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Saturday, October 1, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - Claw Marks


The opening for Carnal Awakenings - A story from the Claw Marks Anthology

Nick Blakewood’s body warmed despite the cold July fog that blew in under the Golden Gate Bridge. Seeing her made more than his temperature rise. He was staring and he hoped she noticed.
The sway of her hips, the grace in her movement, was poetry in motion. Three days had passed since the first time he’d seen her. And three long nights spent dreaming about her delicate features left him restless. When he'd told Mike about the woman, Mike encouraged him to come back and meet her.

Available October 3rd from Rebel Ink Press

23 comments:

Ray Sostre said...

Very beautifully written. I love it and congrats on your release.

Chrystalla Thoma said...

I like very much your style, simple and natural. Great six, and congratulations!

Kathleen Grieve said...

So why hasn't he introduced himself? Very very good!!!

Ruthie said...

Ooh, I like "He was staring and hoped she noticed." Unusual and brazen!

An Open Book said...

What a heart-tugging scene Sara- love it- can't wait for the Claw Marks to release tomorrow

Dawne P

Laura said...

What a wonder scene Sara! Perfectly enticing!

Jean said...

He sounds very sexy. I want to know more. HOpe you sell a ton. Loved the post.

Bonni S. said...

Loved it Sara. Excellent six.

Cynthia Arsuaga said...

Nice scene Sara.

Gem Sivad said...

Congrats on your release. Lovely description of the July morning. Great six!

Randi Alexander said...

Oooh, fascinating six. Loved that it's from his POV, Sara!

Zee Monodee said...

Intriguing! Congrats on the release :)

Heaven Liegh said...

Oh I'm hooked already. 'Poetry in motion' what a beautiful line.

Katie Harper said...

Very good! It drew me in and left me wanting more.

GREAT SIX!!

Lisa Worrall said...

Well done! I love the descriptive nature of your writing...felt like I was there :)

Christine Warner said...

Nicely written Six....love that he got talked into going back to meet this woman...and I loved this line:

He was staring and he hoped she noticed.

For Your Eyes Only~Author Lani Rhea said...

Well written! I love the sway of her hips part. Great six!

SJ said...

Really good! Loved the poetic flow of the story.

Great 6!
SammyJo

Jp Archer said...

Very eloquent and smooth, with a good intensity. Good six.

Sara York said...

Thanks everyone. I can't wait for this to come out tomorrow!

Rawiya said...

Fab 6 Sara, love it!

Taryn Kincaid said...

Nice. Congrats on the release!

Sandra Bunino said...

Love the lust! Can't wait to see where this leads. Very sexy six!