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Friday, January 20, 2012

Flash Fiction Friday Devon Rhodes

Welcome to today's Flash Fiction Friday with Devon Rhodes. For more FFF click here.


The gun pressed to the back of Devon's head didn't worry her as much as the bomb set to explode in three minutes.

Mitch was bigger than her by a hundred pounds, meaner than a rabid dog and dumber than a stump. The seconds ticked by, but he didn't budge his hold on her. She counted down the time as fear pumped through her.

“Tell me the code,” Mitch said.

Devon nodded, Mitch didn’t have time to escape anyways. Mitch removed his hand.


"Let me go and I'll give it to you."


Mitch pushed her away and she stumbled towards the door. Would she make it?


I hope you enjoyed my Flash. Devon was a great sport and had no idea what I was going to write. Did she escape??? I don't know, we'll have to leave that for another episode. In the meanwhile check out her website and her books.

A Ring And A Promise is part of the His Hero Anthology.


Careers in military service are never easy on relationships—even less so when both lovers are in different branches...and both are men.

Naval Academy graduation now under their belts, Cary Barrientos knows the reality of the upcoming separation from his roommate of the past four years. Owen is more to him than just his best friend—he is the one person Cary can see spending his life with.

Owen Marsh knew that when he became Cary’s lover, the day would come when he would have to walk away. Now that day has come, and he’s having a hard time convincing himself that it’s just sex between them. Even with DADT repealed, there is no way a Marine and a Navy flier can be together. He’s just being realistic not expecting more.

When Cary switches their Academy rings, hoping Owen won’t notice, he makes a vow—he will do whatever he has to do, including believing enough for the both of them, to make their unlikely relationship stand the test of time. But when his Marine is called up for duty overseas, can a piece of jewellery and a promise be enough to get them through?

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14 comments:

gemma parkes said...

Run! exciting flash Sara!

Naomi said...

Thrilling flasher. I gotta know if it went off

Jean said...

Very exciting! Will she make it? You leave us hanging. Sucked me in right away, Sara. Well done.

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Kendel Davi said...

The tension grabbed me for the start. Want to know if she makes it or not.

Katie Harper said...

Dude....I could totally helped her out of that situation and the big, mean, dumbass would be on the floor grabbing his balls.

LOVED THE TENSION!!

Yvonne Nicolas said...

In my mind she makes it. She better run her ass off though. Cool post!

Davee said...

Great FFF, I could feel the tension and fear escalate. time ticking down freaks me out for some reason, so this especially upped the thrill level.

ERP said...

Great post Sara :) I hope she makes it.

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Luna Ella Aldora said...

Got my adrenaline pumping on this one, Sara! Is she a good guy or a bad guy?

Rolling Muse In The Roses said...

Wow! Exciting!!

Bonni S. said...

Go, go, go, go... Maybe she'll make it before the big bang. Loved this one!

VenusBookluvr said...

Fabulously exciting post. I hope she's a fast runner!!

Author Cyril J. Michael said...

You've got to complete this -- I need to know if she makes it to safety!