Welcome to this week's Flash Fiction Friday with Kage Alan. He's been overseas celebrating the Chinese New Year, and now he has to pay for his fun. Read on and see how I torture Kage this week. Check out the other Flashes when you're done with this piece.
Kage watched the sun rise through half closed eyes. He’d been here
all night waiting for Pookie to rescue him. He'd tried the door and the window then yelled until his voice was raw. The fire in the grate had died down
hours ago, and the chill of the January morning seeped in.
"Find me, damn it," he whispered.
Damn Ninjas! She'd threatened him and won. Who knows what type of crap
he'd have to say just to get out of her prison.
Sometime close to noon he heard the commotion below. The door
burst open, but it wasn’t his lover.
Oh God, what do I do now?
Does Kage get free? Will he ever make it back to America? Who knows, but while he's away pick up one of his books.
Gaylias: Operation Thunderspell
Agents Nicholas Inker and Anthony Hamilton: one's American, the other is Chinese. One has the brains, the other the brawn. And the one thing they share, besides annoying each other, is an arsenal of insults for anyone caught in the crossfire. Enter the League: they're the latest international threat, a terrorist group with an unknown agenda and untraceable funding. Until now... Guided by Debora, their trigger-happy handler, Nicholas and Anthony are assigned to uncover the League's innermost workings. What they find, however, is completely incidental to their real mission-each is determined to get the last word in, no matter how high the body count. They're two agents, one couple, entrusted with your national security. Let the bickering begin!
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22 comments:
Well, I know exactly what I'd...er...he'd do. I'd...he'd...er...most likely do something very shallow and very savory.
LMAO. What a clever way to have people come back for more. Good job Sara. Nice six.
Yes but I need more. Who was it?? Great flash
LOL That's awesome Sara. I want to know more!
SLira
Well done, you sucked me in quickly and now I'm hanging. I hope you will continue this intriguing story, Sara.
I think SOMEBODY shouldn't leave the country again anytime soon...if he makes it home!
Love it, Sara! It's a great hook made even better because Kage really is off traipsing in the far East.
This is awesome, Sara!
So I guess he's not recued yet... What will happen to him now? I would love to know!!
Great post
Way to go, Sara! I'd love to know who was at the door.
That is a great cliffhanger, Sara! If it wan't his lover, it sounds like it's gonna be...:) xo
We have to get Kage back! lol Fabulous!
Oh Sara, you've latched onto the continuing story ideas for your FFF's. Great, what a wonderful idea, I wish I'd have thought of it. Seriously, I love the visuals you paint, I could feel the cold seeping into my bones. Excellent, maybe we can hook Kage and HER together.
You just love to leave me hanging. Awesome flash Sara.
Sounds like he crossed the wrong person. Hopefully it isn't as bad as he fears.
LOL Great post Sara
So, come on, tell us what happens!
That was awesome Sara! Def had me hooked. Wonder what happened to him? ;-)
I need to know who it was. Tell us more. Great post!
Lesson learned - do not mess with Sara! roflmao...nice! Loved it!
Great job of hooking me! Wonderful FFF.
I'm so curious about Pookie. Nice job!
and then what?? That's quite a cliffhanger, Sara! Safe travels, Kage.
Great flash! Love the cliff hanger!
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