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Wednesday, March 21, 2012

Sara's Lucky 7


Lee Brazil tagged me for this. Here goes.

Here are the rules:
1. Go to page 77 (or 7th) of your current ms
2. Go to line 7
3. Copy down the next 7 lines - sentences or paragraphs - and post them as they're written. No cheating.
4. Tag 7 other authors. No cheating.

7th page 7 Sentences.


From my Goodreads story - The Road To Hell

“I’m sorry,” he whispered behind Grayson, hoping the guy heard him, but praying the others didn’t.

“Get up,” Abbot Benton spit out before turning to leave the room.

Grayson grabbed for his pants, his face red with embarrassment or anger, Mac couldn’t tell which. The guys with guns didn’t turn away and everyone got a good look at his limp cock as he pulled on his pants. They filed out of the room, their captors surrounding them. The abbot stood off to the side, his face a mask of disgust. A small amount of shame trickled through him, unsure if he could even look at Grayson right now. 

3 comments:

Laura said...

Oh, nice. Mine aren't nearly so interesting.

Poppy said...

Um..Sara...you didn't...um...do this right. Um...you are supposed to post 7 chapters. Right. Or, you know, the whole thing. Yep, that was it. Post the whole thing. Lucky 7 really just meant that you were the lucky 7th person or something. *g*

Did you fall for any of that? Great excerpt! Looking forward to reading more!!

Sara York said...

God, I'm so tired, so yes Poppy, I had to think about it for a moment.